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Caroline's comments

--Santtu 11:16, 30 Nov 2004 (PST) The following sentence left me "hanging" -- I felt like it was a beginning of a thought that was not completed. "It is not clear whether or not this would be the same FE exam that other engineers take, as the current FE covers topics such as thermodynamics that are not studied in most computer curriculum."

[JSpaith:] Agreed. Actually this is another paper in and of itself; McConnel wrote 5 pages about it. I'm just going to cut it out completely to avoid the digression.

"...Microsoft has (finally) produced ..." -- do you really want to use "(finally)"?

[JSpaith:] Agreed. I'll cut the finally.

[JSpaith:] Boy, I thought this was going to be an easy edit session until I saw Caroline's comments!