Talk:Caroline

[JSpaith:] Recall your advice to us, Caroline, assuming the policy makers aren't so bright. Well I'm not that bright and I don't know what shibboleth means. Maybe best to leave it out of the 2nd sentence unless this is common public policy speak.

The first sentence of the paper, though not technically a double-negative, kind of had that feel to it. "do not make secure ... do not demand it". I had to think about it a bit, so maybe you could reword slightly.

I'm nitpicking here :) - your intro was I think the best of the 5.

In "For the software ratings to be meaningful, Larry..." - you're supposed to use his last name, aren't you?