Difference between revisions of "Final rough draft--Dec. 3"

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-[[Chapter I Title by Santtu 12/3/04]]
+[[Chapter I Software Vulnerabilities by Santeri (Santtu) Voutilainen 12/3/04]]
-[[Chapter II Title by Jack 12/3/04]]
+[[Chapter II Software Defenses by Jack Richins 12/3/04]]
-[[Chapter III Title by John 12/3/04]]
+[[Chapter III Licensing Software Engineers by John Spaith 12/3/04]]
-[[Chapter IV Title by Andrew 12/3/04]]
+[[Chapter IV Liability for Software Defects by Andrew Pardoe 12/3/04]]
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-'''Notes on final rough drafts'''
-[[Caroline]] Thanks for suggestions. I took them all except for shibboleth I think (if it's a word the New York Times uses I usually keep it is the rule I play by and I couldn't think of something better. plus it's a cool word)
-and the double negative in the first sentence I kept (tested some other folks on it and the vote was "not confusing" by 3-1. Again, got lazy and couldn't think of a better way to say it.)
-there are some pretty major changes, reworkings, based on interviews I did this week--sorry to spring this on you, but I think the thing is much better now.